雅思大作文入门:开头段这样写最节省时间!

文章一提笔,是不是这样的?

With the development of society,…

The debate on … between economic development and the protection of endangered species has been going on for decades.

Whether...has been a hot topic/ an issue of public interest and concern.

对于刚刚起步的雅思小白来说是比较适合的,因为可以帮助我们节省精力,把更多的时间专注在自己的主体段落创作中。但是,对于想要获得高分的同学来说,这种开头就显得千篇一律了,因为并不是所有的题目都适合套用。

俗话说,好的开始是成功的一半。虽然在大作文中,一个好的开头段只占成功的10%,但是给考官对于我们语言水平评判的第一印象,在这篇文章里,我会给大家总结开头段最省时的写法,掌握之后一般都可以写出一个不错的开头。

开头段结构

背景+(转述)+立场

背景:带出题目内容的主题

转述:其他人的想法,即some people believe.. (一般仅在双边讨论类题目中使用)

立场:回答题目中的问题

背景的写法

在开头段中,最让同学们头疼的就是背景的写法,因为只有这一部分是需要我们自己构思内容的,最简单粗暴的方式是我们直接把题目中的内容当作我们的背景,通过它直接引出立场也是非常自然的,但注意需要改写,不能直接照搬。

回顾下前面文章中讲到的改写的方法:

1. 使用同义词

2. 改变词性

3. 句式改变

4. 主动变被动

5. 非谓语和定语从句的替换

👉来看一道例题:

In many cities, problems related to overpopulation are becoming more common. Some governments are now encouraging businesses and individuals to move out of cities to rural areas.

Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

👉改写题干:

Certain governments are now incentivizing moving to rural areas due to issues concerning overpopulation in cities.

👉词:

some->certain

problems->issues

related to->concerning

encourage->incentivize

👉句式:

 

读完题会发现,题目中的两句话为因果关系,因此我们在改写的时候可以把这个逻辑关系也添加进去,用due to进行连接。

立场的写法

回答题目中的问题,也可以简单用term对接下来要写的观点进行简单的交代,但不同题型立场的写法也不尽相同,下面让我们来看一下具体的写法。

 1. 利弊类题目的立场写法

👉例题:

In many cities, problems related to overpopulation are becoming more common. Some governments are now encouraging businesses and individuals to move out of cities to rural areas.

Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

👉1) 一边倒:全都是优点或者全都是缺点

In my opinion, it is a long-term positive for environmental justifications[全是优点].

👉2) 折中,既有优点也有缺点

In my opinion, despite the temporary disadvantages this presents for standards of living and economics[缺点用表转折的逻辑词引出], it is a long-term positive for environmental justifications.

如果采用以上写法撰写立场的部分,那么接下来的主体段我们就可以一段写缺点,一段写优点了。

 2. 观点类题目的立场写法

👉例题:

Some people believe that it is a good idea that older people continue to work if it is possible for them to do.

Do you agree or disagree?

👉1) 一边倒

In my opinion, this is advisable for a minority who are still capable of working.

👉2) 折中

In my opinion, this is advisable for a minority who are still capable of working but the majority should enjoy other pursuits[反方立场用表转折的逻辑词引出].

 3. 双边讨论类题目的立场写法

👉例题:

Some people think that the government should strictly control the supply of fresh water, as it is a limited resource, while others it should not be regulated.

Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

双边讨论题目可以选择两方其中一方作为立场,或者觉得两方立场都有道理,也可以给出自己新的观点作为立场,写法比较灵活

👉背景:

Many believe that it is crucial for governments to oversee public supplies of fresh water.

👉立场:

In my opinion, this is an advisable strategy though there are natural risks that must be taken into consideration.

 4. 报告类题目的立场写法

👉例题:

Many doctors recommend that older people exercise regularly, but most patients do not follow an exercise routine.

Why do you think this happens?

How can people be encouraged to exercise regularly?

报告类题目涉及到两个问题,我们在写立场的时候要注意都回答到,不能有遗漏。

👉背景:

A large proportion of healthcare professionals find that their advice to elderly people concerning exercise is not heeded.

👉立场:

In my opinion, this is due to practical concerns [问题1]and the best encouragement would be through government initiatives.[问题2]

两个问题最好给出明确的回答,比如问原因,我们可以通过词或词组的形式简单概括,让考官明确我们主体段的创作内容。

 5. 混合类题目的立场写法

👉例题:

Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones.

Why is this the case?

Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

同报告类题目,针对两个问题给出明确回答即可。

👉背景:

Many today would argue that children spend too many hours on their smartphones.

👉立场:

In my opinion, this is a natural result of the conveniences these phones afford[问题1] and is decidedly negative as it severely impacts health.[问题2]

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