雅思写作大作文范文解析:解决犯罪问题,教育比监狱更有效吗?

     考  题

In many countries, prison is the most common solution to the problem of crime. However, another effective way is to provide people with higher education so that they cannot become criminals. Do you agree or disagree?

思路整理

题型议论文
找到两个立场并且判断结构prison is the most common solution to the problem of crime.& another effective way is to provide people with higher education

共存

Tprison/ high education
Pto the problem of crime
有没有Rthey cannot become criminals

重点句型

让步

Locked up in prisons, law offenders can be punished and deter them from breaking the law.

监狱可以惩罚罪犯,防止再次犯罪。

正面

Higher education elevates the ethical standard, cultivating law-abiding consciousness.

高等教育可以提高人民的道德素质和守法意识。

To prevent a crime, people should be equipped with professional knowledge to make a living.

公民可以专心学习到专业知识去谋生,不去犯罪。

Lexical resource

Be locked up prisons 囚禁在监狱

offenders 罪犯

Deter sb from doing 制止某人做某事

elevates the ethical standard 提高人们的道德素质

cultivate law-abiding consciousness 培养守法意识

be equipped with 配备

make a living 谋生

考题信息

2018年3月3日考题

参考范文

In many parts of the world, people who have violated the law are put into prison, which is a very effective way of preventing them committing more crimes. However, many experts believe that better education is probably an even more effective way of addressing the problem of crime. I would suggest that both prison and education are important and each plays a different role in crime control.

 

Prison is certainly a place where criminals can be made to understand what wrong they have done to other people and why what they have done before is not socially acceptable. In this way, these criminals will have a better chance to come back to normal life. On top of the remedial function, prison can serve as a deterrent for those with an inclination to crime. The likelihood of losing freedom in prison can most effectively stop them from doing harms to the society and other individuals.

 

Better education can also bring down the overall crime rate in any community, and it is the most desirable preventive measure against crime. To start with, education improves people’s moral standards which enable them to tell right from wrong so that they will build a robust inner wall against any antisocial behaviors. More importantly, people with better education are always able to find a satisfying career that will reward them with a decent life, and they will never think of committing any crime.

 

In conclusion, prison with its remedial and deterrent function and education with its preventive function are both needed in order to make this world a safer place for all of us to live in.(273 words)

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