考 题In many countries, prison is the most common solution to the problem of crime. However, another effective way is to provide people with higher education so that they cannot become criminals. Do you agree or disagree? 雅思写作 雅思大作文
|找到两个立场并且判断结构||prison is the most common solution to the problem of crime.& another effective way is to provide people with higher education|
|T||prison/ high education|
|P||to the problem of crime|
|有没有R||they cannot become criminals|
Locked up in prisons, law offenders can be punished and deter them from breaking the law.
Higher education elevates the ethical standard, cultivating law-abiding consciousness.
To prevent a crime, people should be equipped with professional knowledge to make a living.
Be locked up prisons 囚禁在监狱
Deter sb from doing 制止某人做某事
elevates the ethical standard 提高人们的道德素质
cultivate law-abiding consciousness 培养守法意识
be equipped with 配备
make a living 谋生
2018年3月3日考题In many parts of the world, people who have violated the law are put into prison, which is a very effective way of preventing them committing more crimes. However, many experts believe that better education is probably an even more effective way of addressing the problem of crime. I would suggest that both prison and education are important and each plays a different role in crime control.
Prison is certainly a place where criminals can be made to understand what wrong they have done to other people and why what they have done before is not socially acceptable. In this way, these criminals will have a better chance to come back to normal life. On top of the remedial function, prison can serve as a deterrent for those with an inclination to crime. The likelihood of losing freedom in prison can most effectively stop them from doing harms to the society and other individuals.
Better education can also bring down the overall crime rate in any community, and it is the most desirable preventive measure against crime. To start with, education improves people’s moral standards which enable them to tell right from wrong so that they will build a robust inner wall against any antisocial behaviors. More importantly, people with better education are always able to find a satisfying career that will reward them with a decent life, and they will never think of committing any crime.
In conclusion, prison with its remedial and deterrent function and education with its preventive function are both needed in order to make this world a safer place for all of us to live in.（273 words）