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上题:
It will be better to have wide use of driverless cars for both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?
题目分析:
Type: Opinion (partially agree)
- Body 1: benefits for society include less traffic congestion due to accidents and poor driving
- Body 2: however, drawbacks are that it takes away from the enjoyment of driving and can infringe upon personal privacy

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-- Essay Analysis 范文解析 --
-- (1) Introduction --

Paraphrasing from the Statement/Question:
- be better to = is beneficial
- wide use = wide-spread adoption of
- cars = vehicles
- individuals = citizens
- society = the general society at large
Standard Phrase for the “Opinion” type essay:
- There is a school of thought that suggests…
- I only partially agree with this opinion,
Words showing Cohesion (C&C):
- only
- , as there
- , and
- that it
- presently
Vocabulary:
- the wide-spread adoption of ……的广泛使用
- (society) at large 整个 (社会);广大社会
- privacy concerns 隐私顾虑
- inhibit 抑制;阻碍
- the joy ___ receive from 从……中得到的乐趣
-- (2) Body 1 --

Standard IELTS essay phrase:
- One of the main benefits…is that…
Vocabulary and Collocations:
- traffic congestion 交通阻塞
- the concept of ……的概念
- automobiles 车辆
- to successfully operate 成功操作/运转
- on-board navigation system 车载导航系统
- connected to a centralized network of 连接到集中式网络
- information nodes 信息节点
- relay (information) 发送 (信息);传递(信息)
- information processed 处理后的信息
- data from sensors and cameras 来自传感器和摄像机的信息
- built into 内置
- prevent accidents 避免事故
- traffic backlogs 交通堵塞
- metropolitan 大都市
- ease of mind 心情舒畅
- commuting 通勤
Words Showing Cohesion [Signposting words, conjunctions, relative pronouns] (C&C)
- they
- likely
- , especially
- In order for
- , the
- this
- also includes
- Altogether,
- , and the resultant
- This can only enhance
- also
- while
- , as
-- (3) Body 2 --

Standard IELTS essay phrase:
- It is, however, precisely this…
Vocabulary and Collocations:
- interconnectedness between ……之间的互联
- a centralized traffic information hub 中心化的交通信息中心
- stems from 来源于;源自
- the fact that ……的事实
- , and by proxy, 由此得出;相当于
- Anxious 焦虑
- governmental body 管理机构
- tracking their every move 追踪一切行踪
- transforming society 社会变革
- the age-old joy of (idiomatic expression) 长久以来的乐趣
- suppressed 压抑;被压制
- relegated (condemned) to the dustbin of history (idiomatic expression) 淡出历史舞台
Words Showing Cohesion [Signposting words, conjunctions, relative pronouns] (C&C)
- It
- however
- precisely
- this
- with regard to
- , and by proxy,
- While many may feel this
- , there
- those that would feel
- Perhaps the most…however,
- that by
- , and
-- (4) Conclusion --

Standard IELTS essay phrase:
- In conclusion,
- I believe
Vocabulary and Collocations:
- the mass adoption of ……的大规模应用
- traffic jams 交通阻塞
- the appearance of ……的出现
- the inevitable extinction of ……不可避免的消失
- one of life’s little pleasures (idiomatic expression) 生活中的小乐趣
- slightly unnerving 让人不安
- ventures 冒险
Words Showing Cohesion [Signposting words, conjunctions, relative pronouns] (C&C):
- greatly
- , as it
- lead to
- of both
- ; despite this though,
- as
- who
- , and for many with the population that also
- the same
- , not to mention that it
- , no matter where one