上题：

It will be better to have wide use of driverless cars for both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement？

题目分析：

Type: Opinion (partially agree)

• Body 1: benefits for society include less traffic congestion due to accidents and poor driving
• Body 2: however, drawbacks are that it takes away from the enjoyment of driving and can infringe upon personal privacy

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-- Essay Analysis 范文解析 --

-- (1) Introduction --

Paraphrasing from the Statement/Question:

• be better to = is beneficial
• wide use = wide-spread adoption of
• cars = vehicles
• individuals = citizens
• society = the general society at large

Standard Phrase for the “Opinion” type essay:

• There is a school of thought that suggests…
• I only partially agree with this opinion,

Words showing Cohesion (C&C):

• only
• , as there
• , and
• that it
• presently

Vocabulary:

• the wide-spread adoption of ……的广泛使用
• (society) at large 整个 (社会)；广大社会
• privacy concerns 隐私顾虑
• inhibit 抑制；阻碍
• the joy ___ receive from 从……中得到的乐趣

-- (2) Body 1 --

Standard IELTS essay phrase:

• One of the main benefits…is that…

Vocabulary and Collocations:

• traffic congestion 交通阻塞
• the concept of ……的概念
• automobiles 车辆
• to successfully operate 成功操作/运转
• on-board navigation system 车载导航系统
• connected to a centralized network of 连接到集中式网络
• information nodes 信息节点
• relay (information) 发送 (信息)；传递（信息）
• information processed 处理后的信息
• data from sensors and cameras 来自传感器和摄像机的信息
• built into 内置
• prevent accidents 避免事故
• traffic backlogs 交通堵塞
• metropolitan 大都市
• ease of mind 心情舒畅
• commuting 通勤

Words Showing Cohesion [Signposting words, conjunctions, relative pronouns] (C&C)

• they
• likely
• , especially
• In order for
• , the
• this
• also includes
• Altogether,
• , and the resultant
• This can only enhance
• also
• while
• , as

-- (3) Body 2 --

Standard IELTS essay phrase:

• It is, however, precisely this…

Vocabulary and Collocations:

• interconnectedness between ……之间的互联
• a centralized traffic information hub 中心化的交通信息中心
• stems from 来源于；源自
• the fact that ……的事实
• , and by proxy, 由此得出；相当于
• Anxious 焦虑
• governmental body 管理机构
• tracking their every move 追踪一切行踪
• transforming society 社会变革
• the age-old joy of (idiomatic expression) 长久以来的乐趣
• suppressed 压抑；被压制
• relegated (condemned) to the dustbin of history (idiomatic expression) 淡出历史舞台

Words Showing Cohesion [Signposting words, conjunctions, relative pronouns] (C&C)

• It
• however
• precisely
• this
• with regard to
• , and by proxy,
• While many may feel this
• , there
• those that would feel
• Perhaps the most…however,
• that by
• , and

-- (4) Conclusion --

Standard IELTS essay phrase:

• In conclusion,
• I believe

Vocabulary and Collocations:

• the mass adoption of ……的大规模应用
• traffic jams 交通阻塞
• the appearance of ……的出现
• the inevitable extinction of ……不可避免的消失
• one of life’s little pleasures (idiomatic expression) 生活中的小乐趣
• slightly unnerving 让人不安
• ventures 冒险

Words Showing Cohesion [Signposting words, conjunctions, relative pronouns] (C&C):

• greatly
• , as it
• lead to
• of both
• ; despite this though,
• as
• who
• , and for many with the population that also
• the same
• , not to mention that it
• , no matter where one