Lying can never have a good outcome. Lying to someone sets them up for failure. Many times we tell lies to protect people’s feelings and save ourselves from telling uncomfortable truths. For instance, we might lie about someone’s talent, looks, dress-sense or abilities. We do this so not to offend them and we think that it\'s harmless. But in fact, our lies are actually feeding into their delusions and possibly causing them trouble later in life.
use synonyms where possible
lying → deceiving someone
lie (as a verb) → distort the truth
lies (plural noun) → fabrications
Lying can never have a good outcome. Deceiving someone to someone sets them up for failure Many times we tell lies to protect people\'s feelings and save ourselves from telling uncomfortable truths. For instance, we might distort the truth about someone’s talent looks dress-sense or abilities. We do this so not to offend them and we think that it\'s harmless, But in fact, our fabrications are actually feeding into their delusions and possibly causing them trouble later in life.
Schools need to be more conscious of the types of food that they serve to childrenbecause obesity is a major health issue. Infants are becoming increasingly obese at an alarming rate.
Kindergartens could perhaps utilize chefs to make healthier nourishments. If collegesserved better solids then teenagers would be less likely to become obese.
some words have no direct synonym
下文使用代词 “they” 指代；
用“school canteens” 比“colleges”更精确
用 “types of food”、“food options”
“more varied options ”避免单调
if no direct synonym rewrite the sentence
● 用词组 “to put on weight”代替“obese”
Schools need to be more conscious of the types of food that they serve to children because obesity is a major health issue. They could perhaps utilize chefs to make healthier food options for their students. If school canteens served more varied options then the children would be less likely to put on weight.
Childhood obesity is a persistent health issue that can be partly attributed to the ways in which schools cater to their students. It is well know that cafeteria menus areseldom healthy and more often than not contain food items that are high in saturated fats and sugars. If schools were to overhaul their menus in favour of less calorie dense foods, there would no doubt be a decrease in the number of young people suffering from overweight issues.