雅思小作文评分标准:
- 5分:仅能使用有限的语法结构→句式重复较多
- 6分:综合使用简单句式与复杂句式→可以使用一些简单句+复杂句
- 7分:运用各种复杂的语法结构→灵活使用,而不是一味使用最长、最难的句式
2008 pass rates in Business, Science and Maths and Engineering were considerably lower in 2008 than in 2012, so the greastest level of improvement took place in these disciplines(科目).
At just over 80% in 2012 and 70% in 2018, averagepass rates among Computer Science students were by far the highest.
2008 pass rates in Business, Science, and Maths and Engineering were considerably lower in 2008 than in 2012, which means that the greatest level of improvement took place in these disciplines.
对,这就是同学们都爱使用的定语从句
,也是很好的组成复杂句的手段之一:
■ People in Turkey spent on food, drinks and tobacco with the largest percentage, which was 32.14%.
■ In 2009, personal needs and unexpected problems were each cited by around 10% of people, both of which grew to around 20% ten years later.
The chart provides information about how many employees were away from work in three different years and the reasons given.
这个句型叫宾语从句,常见于小作文的开头段,通常在对题目进行改写时使用,其它的替换表达还有:The diagram/table/figure/illustration/graph + indicates/represents/shows/outlines... 比如:
■ The pie charts compare the distribution of water usage for different purposes among local residents during the period from 1988 to 2008.
■ The bar charts illustrates changes in the electricity rates in four states in Australia.
It is noticeable that for both types of household with children, a higher than average proportion were living in poverty at this time.
这种句型叫形式主语从句,可以用来描述一些细节信息或者比较明显的特征,同学们还可以写:It is obvious that.../It is interesting to note that... 等
■ It is also interesting to note that almost all showed a decrease in 1994 in amount of goods transported except for the pipeline, which actually peaked in that year.
There is a sharp rise in the next hour to reach its maximum before collapsing again to a lower level by the end of the day.
用There be句型非常适合用来描写小作文中的客观数据,表示“有”或者“存在”的意思。其它的例子还有:
■ There were no figures given for male part-time workers, but female part-time had forty hours of leisure time, only slightly more than women in full-time employment, perhaps reflecting their work in the home.
By 2005, the time needed to produce a car had descended to just 21 hours.
被动句也是小作文中很常用、且较易上手的复杂句式之一,当描述对象是物体或流程时经常用到,举几个例子:
■ Meanwhile, timber was the most popular product in 1980 but two decades later paper was produced more than the others.
■ By creating an enclosed(封闭的) environment, the lid(盖子) on the top must be closed so there would be no smoke letting out.
After entering the venue, customers could see a cash desk on the right and in front of them were several round tables arranged in a circle.
倒装句也是适合使用的复杂句式之一,常用在地图题当中,比如:
■ In the southeast and west part were many shops opened along new roads on both sides.
■ In the west was a river running from north to south.
建议同学们如果想在考场上使用倒装句,私下练习时一定要确保句子的结构是正确的,拿不准的可以找专业人士批改一下,切记“半桶水”上考场,模棱两可地写哦~
复杂句真的没有大家想得那么难~但是也不能掉以轻心,犯下过多的错误,所以掌柜建议同学们可以仿照在上面列出的句子,进行一定量的改写练习,看自己比较擅长哪些,在考场上发挥它们的优势哦!